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[kc7655]

so, here's my latest drawing. i don't know how long it took to do, something like 5 or 6 hours over the course of four days. i screwed up on the hair on her right side. it's not supposed to go that far out, but I didn't notice until it was too late so i did my best to correct it by adding a pony tail so she doesn't look deformed. charcoal doesn't erase
anyways, tell me what you think!

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[Deco]

Think you've done an excellent job kc7655
just a slight note re the eyes, seems they look different ways,
just my opinion and it's the left eye when you look on the drawing
that seems to me not right

chiaroscuro's great you're doing really well with the charcoal
btw I like the way you've done the hair very charming

[kc7655]

Deco, on Apr 18 2008, 10:06 AM, said:

Think you've done an excellent job kc7655
just a slight note re the eyes, seems they look different ways,
just my opinion and it's the left eye when you look on the drawing
that seems to me not right

chiaroscuro's great you're doing really well with the charcoal
btw I like the way you've done the hair very charming

i finally looked up chiaroscuro, thanks!
i think you might be right about the eye. it does look a little off. i was thinking that if i widened her right eye, it might fix it. what do you think?

[Deco]

Well you've got two possibilities either to widen
her right eye or to move the pupil closer to the nose
think that will fix it
The skin and hair are done very well, good job
Is that a commissioned work again or you just drew for
yourself?

[Da' Bull]

all I can say is WOW!!! excellent job, I do agree about the eyes look like they're not looking at the same place. besides that...perfecto!! magnifico!!

[kc7655]

thanx da'bull
and to deco, i think i'll widen her right eye and see if i can erase any of the right side of the iris to keep it from looking like a gigantic eye. and no, this isn't a commission. i was just bored and felt like i should do something. i'm trying to find someone that knows how to design websites so could start getting more commissions though.

[housedoc]

Hi again kc7655 - another fantastic piece of work. Would agree with the others about the left eye though. But nontheless fantastic. Complexion and hair wonderful !! About your website why don't you ask Deco - she's brilliant at designing websites etc - take a look at one she did for me http://www.easyletvillas.com . Hope you don't mind Deco me recommending you?