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[deedee]

Hi all
Here's another painting just completed for a Painting Challenge on wet canvas.
Like to know what you think..
!st one is my version and 2nd is original picture
Della
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[Stickmaker]

Hi deedee, The only thing that i'd do i think is to lighten some of the green on the moutain , nice one Della . Regards Stickmaker

[Deco]

Hi Deedee
Hope you're well, nice to see something new from you

I agree with Stckmaker - some more light on the mountains
would make it better, actually I like on the reference photo
exactly this that you have shades on the foreground and lights
on the background. Another thing - adding more nuances in the green
palette you're using will improve and "enrich" the painting.
Think more sky above the mountain would be also better because
the peak at the mo reaches the end of the painting and makes it a bit overloaded.
Hope you don't mind me posting these notes

[housedoc]

Hi Deedee - yes I think I would agree with Deco re the nuances of the green and the sky - but getting there. Hope you are OK