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[kc7655]

so here's a picture that i drew, it was commissioned for 150$. not as much as i would like to make but enough to be worth it. the wrinkles were a challenge, and so was the hair. i think the eyes are okay, but to me they were a hair off. back to the hair: this woman doesn't have hair, she has a bird's nest on her head, so for my peace of mind i simplified it. i also roughed it out towards the bottom, partly because to me it's supposed to be art, not a picture and partly because i was really tired of working on it.
so let me know what you think, critique it, but since i'm done with it and no longer have the drawing take it a little easy. i hate knowing what's wrong with something when i can't fix it. thanx

[kc7655]

there's something wrong with the computer that i'm working on, my camera, or this website, so i can't upload a picture or edit my post. i'll try to get it up as soon as i can, so for now just use your imagination.

[Neo_Art]

Hi,

Just a test:

 P1000362_22222.jpg   66.61K   2 downloads

Also maybe you will find this post useful:
http://arttrade.net/forums/index.php?s=&am...ost&p=14799

[kc7655]

okay there we go, i just needed to resize it.

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•  kc__s_stuff_001.jpg   60.74K   3 downloads

[Stickmaker]

Hi KC, Well seeing how i couldnt do better and only recently into art cant say that i can find anything wrong so, looks good to me .Regards Stickmaker

[Deco]

Looks great to me KC7655
Think you've done an excellent job on the face
and it's nice to see that you managed to finish the work,
cos you mentioned before that you usually get bored and don't
like finishing your drawings so it's a progress and a good one
also it's great you took commission for your job, it certainly makes difference

Just a slight note if you don't mind - the collar line on the back
is a bit bigger and it actually doesn't show right the neck line,
hope it's not a big critique to spoil your mood

[kc7655]

thanx for the comments, and yeah it does make a difference when there's money to be made.
you might be right about the collar, but she was kinda hunched down in the pic. a little like a turtle.

[housedoc]

HI KC7655 - well if this is a 'turtle' - I'm 'King Kong' hahaha!! The face is fantastic - wish I could do anywhere near this - I would be well chuffed !! Great work