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[yorkie]

A little adventurous for me
as i never do this sort of work
i have struggled with it,and it still needs a bit of work,
But it'd be nice to know what you think good/bad comments appreciated

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[Stickmaker]

Hi yorkie ,Welcome to the site . I've looked at your postings like the sea scape best as it looks clearer than the other photo's, would like to see the dog clearer . Regards Stickmaker

[yorkie]

Hi,thank's..
i will update the dog one as soon as ive done some more work on it

[Deco]

Think that one is a very good attempt, nice colour-palette and composition

Few things that need improving in my opinion:
the sand on the foreground - too bright colour and the texture is still not fine;
the sea - there is still not enough depth, something you can achieve by adding
more nuances especially on the background where the water is deeper
and the rocks - those which are on the foreground should be more
detailed to divide the plans is the painting
Hope you don't mind me pointing the things above
Look forward to seeing the update

[yorkie]

Hi,no your very welcome!
i've never had any tuition or guidance thats why i joined the forum,
i just paint from imagination and thats all.i wish to be able to better myself with a little help and extra eye's many thank's mel

[housedoc]

Hi Yorkie - hope you like the site - nice to see some of your work and as you say when you are learning it is nice to have critique cos this helps with you getting better all the time. Deco is great for the critique cos she has a 'good eye' and is also a great artist herself Talk soon

[Deco]

Thanks Denise
I've been busy recently and had internet problems
which I hope have been fixed but you never know with the internet

I did not have to much time to paint but in fact made two new paintings
for a friend one was a present, the other was commisioned,
will try to post them within the next days, suppose she won't mind
me sharing with you, hope they will look nice in her wonderful lounge

[housedoc]

De Nada Deco Hope internet connection is getting better I thought you had telefonica installed - are you still having problems? Artwork looking bl........ing fantastic and had a few remarks how good they look Teresa is wanting to copy them !! Well that'll not go down well will it - as if!! I will certainly not mind you sharing - you need to show everyone how great they are. I just tried to take photo of them in lounge but alas my camera needs battery charging - but will post once camera is charged

Are you OK - not heard from you - beginning to worry Let me know if everything OK

[Deco]

I'm fine Denise, thanks for asking, just sent you an email
for now the internet's fine too hope it will be in the future as well

Pleased you like the paintings Will post a new thread within the next days,
when I sort out the images in my computer, hope then you'll post
how they look in the house
Nice to hear Teresa also likes them although I'm not very keen on the idea
somebody to copy my works but knowing how mean Teresa is she wouldn't spend
a penny on an art work suppose that size canvases she will find expensive too
and that might make her giving up the idea ) think she has copied some of yours as well

Anyway lets' leave people to do art Hope you're well too

[housedoc]

Yes will post mine when u post yours I know I nearly said to Teresa you shouldn't copy them but i don't think she will be able to anyway !! Yes she copied two of mine and told Phil I did them cos he wanted to buy two of mine and she wouldn't let him - silly cow ! As you said she doesn't like spending money - only mine !!!! hahaha!

I'm not too bad i've just done another painting so will post in a minute

[Deco]

anyway best of luck to Teresa

I'll see what I'll do with the images to post them.

btw just saw your new art work, very good one
seems you spent an useful day