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#1 Da' Bull

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 07:33 PM

Here's my latest, took about 5 hours to complete. let me know what you think.

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#2 Deco

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 08:23 PM

Hi Da' Bull
Nice to see some new work from you :)

You've done excellent work on this one :cheer:
Just one small thing - cigar does not seam
very well in his mouth as it is not between his lips.

But everything else is great :)
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#3 Neo_Art

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 08:39 PM

Agree with Deco about the cigar but in general the darwing is great! :cheer:
Good job! :) Well done!

#4 Stickmaker

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Posted 03 February 2008 - 11:41 PM

Hi Da ' Bull , Always good to see your work . A standard that i doubt i will ever achieve . However i must say that i agree with the comments about the cigar and look forward to seeing any alteration that you may post, i feel pretty sure that you can and will impove the cigar situation . I may post the painting that im doing at the present at art class and have already spent 6hours on , wish that i could do something of the calibrer of the work you post . Regards Stickmaker

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#5 Da' Bull

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Posted 06 February 2008 - 05:29 AM

I didn't really notice the cigar thing until you guys pointed it out. I tweeked it a little there and a few other places, let me know if you think it fixed the problem and how the new picture looks in general, thanks!! Thanks for all the comments too!! :cheer:

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#6 Deco

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Posted 07 February 2008 - 11:01 PM

The drawing is great in the way it has been done, chiaroscuro and anatomy
are excellent :cheer: , great texture on the hat as well but I still
think the the cigar is not Ok, it still looks like it is not between his lips,
try to follow the reference photo you're using and a bit of imagination
on how it looks when somebody smokes a cigar :)

Anyway I think you'll manage with this, It's always
a pleasure to look at your drawings, think other members would
appreciate your comments on their works as well having in mind
the experience you've got :)
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#7 housedoc

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Posted 28 March 2008 - 06:12 PM

:) Hi Da'Bull - I would agree about the cigar in the mouth too - although the rest of it is absolutely fantastic as always and don't know how you manage to do such great work in a short time!! Look forward to seeing the next update :clapping: Nice seeing some more of your work Da'Bull and I think what Deco says about critique from you for others would be a great idea cos you also obviously have the 'eye' for what looks good and what doesn't etc etc :)




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