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[kc7655]

so, here's my new drawing(charcoal and graphite), i think it's finished but i'm always looking for suggestions.
i did some work on the background which i think i should start doing more of.
oh yeah, some of the marks on her shoulder, the bottom of the background, and the top right on the bricks, are charcoal smudges that will not come off any suggestions about that?

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[Denisejart]

Hi nice angelina !
is the picture here actually longer than your origional image ?
maybe it needs shortening a bit .....or maybe actually cropping th picture just beow the breast ?

[Deco]

Think you're doing well with the charcoal
I like the drawing although I personally find her face
a bit long, left shoulder doesn't seem to be correct as well
and looks too small in comparision with the head

Don't think you have to work to much on the background
cos you'll lose the contrast on the foreground by adding
more details/shades on the background, it's just my opinion.