New Piece of Artwork
Posted 25 October 2007 - 07:00 PM
Good job you did. I like the how sunny is it.
Is it possible you to attach a bigger photo?
Moved to "Open Critique Forum"
Posted 25 October 2007 - 07:52 PM
Just two suggestions if you don't mind
The reflection on the water is to light almost the same colour like the sun,
maybe you should make it a bit darker or in a different colour.
and about the sky - I like it a lot but you've put two colours
in the right hand side - cream and sienna and they look a bit
separated if you try to gradate the colour or to put a middle tone
also check your horizon line seems a bit curved
I must say the colour palette is excellent but it's typical
of your paintings
Posted 26 October 2007 - 07:17 AM
Sorry Neo I realised after I had posted that I put it in the wrong 'section' silly me
Have you both got any ideas of a 'title'?
Here is a 'larger' version for you
Posted 26 October 2007 - 12:58 PM
Posted 26 October 2007 - 01:34 PM
Edited by Neo_Art, 26 October 2007 - 01:47 PM.
Posted 26 October 2007 - 01:52 PM
I've now adjusted this piece of artwork - but I think it must be my eyes is the horizon straighter now? And... does the rest of it look OK now?
ReducedUntitledArt0001.JPG 157.05KB 1 downloads
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