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#1 housedoc

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Posted 25 October 2007 - 04:17 PM

:cheer: Hi everyone - just done a new piece of artwork. A little critique please :whistling2: Also not sure what to call it at the moment - any ideas?

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#2 Neo_Art

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Posted 25 October 2007 - 07:00 PM

Hi Denise, :rolleyes:

Good job you did. :cheer: I like the how sunny is it. :whistling2:

Is it possible you to attach a bigger photo? :cheer:


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#3 Deco

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Posted 25 October 2007 - 07:52 PM

Looks great Denise, well done :whistling2:

Just two suggestions if you don't mind :rolleyes:
The reflection on the water is to light almost the same colour like the sun,
maybe you should make it a bit darker or in a different colour.
and about the sky - I like it a lot but you've put two colours
in the right hand side - cream and sienna and they look a bit
separated if you try to gradate the colour or to put a middle tone
between them :cheer:
also check your horizon line seems a bit curved

I must say the colour palette is excellent :cheer: but it's typical
of your paintings :cheer:
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#4 housedoc

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Posted 26 October 2007 - 07:17 AM

:cheer: Thanks for critique Deco - I will try to have another 'go' today and will hopefully will show you the results :whistling2: It was only that I was copying from a picture and it looked like that but your right cos I wouldn't normally do it this way :cheer:

Sorry Neo I realised after I had posted that I put it in the wrong 'section' silly me :cheer:

Have you both got any ideas of a 'title'?

Here is a 'larger' version for you :rolleyes:

#5 housedoc

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Posted 26 October 2007 - 07:20 AM

:whistling2: I'll try again with the 'upload' of the photo !!

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#6 housedoc

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Posted 26 October 2007 - 07:23 AM

:rolleyes: Mmmmm - this doesn't look any bigger :whistling2: I'll try again - it'll probably be too blooming large now :cheer:

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#7 Stickmaker

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Posted 26 October 2007 - 12:58 PM

Hi Denise , I like it , what have you done it with oils . cannot criticse as i cannot see anything other than the horizone line to mention . Nice to see you back again . Regards Stickmaker

#8 housedoc

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Posted 26 October 2007 - 01:34 PM

:cheer: Hi Stickmaker - thanks for comments :cheer: I have done it in acrylics - I nearly always use them although I have done one piece in oils quite a while ago. It is just that oils takes ages to dry and acrylics dry a lot faster. Therefore you can sell them quicker!! 'Money, money, money' :whistling2::rolleyes:

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#9 housedoc

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Posted 26 October 2007 - 01:52 PM

:whistling2: Thanks Neo - bl*****dy stupid computer !!

I've now adjusted this piece of artwork - but I think it must be my eyes is the horizon straighter now? And... does the rest of it look OK now?

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