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[housedoc]

Hi everyone - just done a new piece of artwork. A little critique please Also not sure what to call it at the moment - any ideas?

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[Neo_Art]

Hi Denise,

Good job you did. I like the how sunny is it.

Is it possible you to attach a bigger photo?


Moved to "Open Critique Forum"

[Deco]

Looks great Denise, well done

Just two suggestions if you don't mind
The reflection on the water is to light almost the same colour like the sun,
maybe you should make it a bit darker or in a different colour.
and about the sky - I like it a lot but you've put two colours
in the right hand side - cream and sienna and they look a bit
separated if you try to gradate the colour or to put a middle tone
between them
also check your horizon line seems a bit curved

I must say the colour palette is excellent but it's typical
of your paintings

[housedoc]

Thanks for critique Deco - I will try to have another 'go' today and will hopefully will show you the results It was only that I was copying from a picture and it looked like that but your right cos I wouldn't normally do it this way

Sorry Neo I realised after I had posted that I put it in the wrong 'section' silly me

Have you both got any ideas of a 'title'?

Here is a 'larger' version for you

[housedoc]

I'll try again with the 'upload' of the photo !!

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[housedoc]

Mmmmm - this doesn't look any bigger I'll try again - it'll probably be too blooming large now

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[Stickmaker]

Hi Denise , I like it , what have you done it with oils . cannot criticse as i cannot see anything other than the horizone line to mention . Nice to see you back again . Regards Stickmaker

[housedoc]

Hi Stickmaker - thanks for comments I have done it in acrylics - I nearly always use them although I have done one piece in oils quite a while ago. It is just that oils takes ages to dry and acrylics dry a lot faster. Therefore you can sell them quicker!! 'Money, money, money'

This post has been edited by Neo_Art: Oct 26 2007, 01:47 PM

[housedoc]

Thanks Neo - bl*****dy stupid computer !!

I've now adjusted this piece of artwork - but I think it must be my eyes is the horizon straighter now? And... does the rest of it look OK now?

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